Tuesday, 12 April 2016

camp writing!

Feeling the breeze as I got out of the amazing but very hot car. As I walked five steps north. Suddenly all of a sudden it was freezing. I desperately wanted my jumper,but my warm jumper was in a grey shinny trailer. Everyone was waiting around for about five minutes until Doug had came out on his medium tractor so we followed him down the bumpy hill to the camp site.” What a lovely view” I said in a quiet voice. Wow the first thing I saw of the special day was… the bright playground I wondered how stable was the see-saw. Luckily we got some yummy morning tea after the car ride. ”Mm” I said happily drinking my coreal. Finally the exiting part we got to go through the cabins and meet our beds and team mates. Our first activity was rafting one of my favorite but a scary moment since it was my first time as we got into the the shimmering water. I loved the sound it was like a piece of slow music that drifted along the river. At the end there was a massive rapid but we stopped and jumped down a high rock at the measurement of about 10 meters high. I was afraid that something would’ve happened to me so I went out until I decided that I wanted to face my fear of heights. Suddenly Harriet had the same feeling as me so I stood up straight and said in a medium voice “I will go with you. ”So we went I was extremely scared that I would fail and brake myself. I closed my eyes and jumped 1...2...3 I made It as I swam across to my rafting boat. I was so happy that day made me realize that if I put my mind to it and not think about it to much I will be able to do anything. As we were making it to the end we started trying to stay in the awesome rafting boat for age's until it came to an end. The last night was tough to sleep because I was thinking about to much things I shut my eyes and then in 2 seconds I was asleep. In the morning it was so hazy I could hardly see a thing. As I hopped into the car I really wanted to walk home there was so much shouting as I got to school I ran to my mum and gave her a big hug I really missed her until she told me some bad news…… I will miss camp and I hope I can go again!

1 comment:

  1. "Well done Luka I really like how you have used descriptive language to describe your feelings. Next time you could try and shorten your sentences. Sorry to hear about you getting bad news.